Hi Edinson, Regarding to your postcard, I think, you use in good way some periods,commas and exclamation marks; but when you describe "The Big Lake", in my opinion, it's necessary to finish with a Exclamation mark, because in that way you can give emphasis to it. Moreover, I think, after "landscapes" you should write a period and by the way, after "Regards" you should write a comma. Finally you need to complete the information to whom you are sending this postcard ;). Regards, Johanna Bastos ;)
Hi Edinson,
ReplyDeleteRegarding to your postcard, I think, you use in good way some periods,commas and exclamation marks; but when you describe "The Big Lake", in my opinion, it's necessary to finish with a Exclamation mark, because in that way you can give emphasis to it. Moreover, I think, after "landscapes" you should write a period and by the way, after "Regards" you should write a comma.
Finally you need to complete the information to whom you are sending this postcard ;).
Regards,
Johanna Bastos ;)